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I had to go back a little to find the comment. My mind was on the last two pages.
I don't know what you've read of the earlier stories but Doctor Claw in this AU. Isn't to be messed with and he has killed MAD agents under him in the past ( even the man above him, who used to run the agency when it was named Scolex Enterprises ). I don't know where to draw the line on him as a villain since I've read much worse for other IG fan fiction as to his actions.
 

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Finished last night.


Again, I'm not saying my comments to a page unless asked. ?

After this was finished last night, I jumped on formally writing the next five pages after page 90. It has taken over a year to really kick off this aspect of the story. You will start to catch the CS vibes at least in regards to the first animated series, soon.

... Please remember the whole story was heavily outlined in advance of being produced. It's just writing it formally in clips helps me to always remember full details needing to be presented.
 

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Your author comments are more than welcome. We want to know what you think about your work since it means so much to you. And it would be vary cool if you made a character bible showing how all the characters and events are connected. Your world and characters are very fleshed out and people would like to know more about them. We’re all wishing you well like always.
 

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? !
Thanks ok, starting with this section of story.
That Mini Cooper is meant to be Zack's car but it's being drawn from refence photos. To be exact about those refence pics., summer before last back when I was in Ohio. I purchased a couple toy cars at decent scale even with moving doors. Both were picked up meant to be used for this line of the plot. That Mini Cooper and a Jeep survived my old home being flooded.
The plates for both the pickup & mini were drawn at a very large scale. In truth that wasn't needed for the pickup but I decided what the hey about the deal. Very likely the rear of the Mini will be shown again later and I wanted to keep the details always the same. Something also I tend to do with drawn license plates is add in my normal trivia to a moment. The Mini's plate reads DNX 1991:

D - DiC
N - Net fli X
1991 - When Where in the World premiered.

Alan's visual bluetooth / virtual screen monocle was going to have a very different introduction in Devil's Blood but starting out as a pair of glasses. Skipping over normal glasses and introducing this tech., helps this story better than that one. Also that explanation will be clear down the road unless guesses have been made already by you guys.

I knew somehow this group needed to be alerted to Finch's first crime in this story. Knowing some people to combat noise they don't like, blast their car radios in turn. I figured Zack blasting a police scanner worked as a good plot device.

I don't know what to say for character bibles. Really except for Julie Justice having listened to the audiobook adaption of B-Side Tracks. Both her and Lucy, having gone through a Penny & Brain story. I don't know if any of you have read the stories not presented here. What is already known by you guys I'm unaware of to your reading?

I'll post up info on any character upon request.

This is really the most complex fiction-verse I have ever written. It would take one hell of a long post to lay it all out and spoiler would happen because Shattered is in the past.
 

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... So much for requests. ?
This was finished around 9pm last night. I just decided not to post it up then since I needed to jump on to a piece of promised art now finished.

The name of the place being robbed did not come from out of the blue. Like what has happened scattered through out the series. The name JJH Natural History Museum comes from the Metro City Tourist Brochure ( where other refences have come from too ).

Please forgive the curse word, you guys know I don't use them often.

 

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Finished a short while ago. The interesting note to the page is something you don't see. The museum was drawn in full as a rough sketch but I didn't want to use that in panel one. Instead that drawing has become for the .PSD file, a hidden layer I can refence again.

 

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I enjoy getting out story details I've known about for well over a year now. I guess my favorite parts are important plot aspects I've been itching to put in comic form along with random bits while fitting, help the scene. There is so much coming and it's going to take ages to get to it. It bothers me I know the full story while some people want answers and have to wait.
I have to say for minor scenes, one scene coming stands out to me more as of a few weeks ago compared to over a year back. When eventually the Marshal Flight Space Center comes in and Sydney is helping Finch. At first I was just looking forward to drawing the comedic villain scene playing out. Now added in and two script versions exist. The newest one has my ideas on Data and Scooter. I find it a little shame they're one shot characters.
 

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