Plot Line B?

[systemcat]

I'll PM this. To start, it on a more simplified version was given to a new friend on DA that wanted to start reading but knew nothing of the series for order of stories. Why this got more complex is a complaint I've gotten on on FF.net because not all of the series shows up there.

I don't know if this deserves open posting here because I just don't know if people have the slightest interest knowing about the series presentation. It's like a very ordered take on what could be discovered through DA.

 

[systemcat]

I don't know what to say here at now 50 pages in. Normally I give a whole bunch of comments with markers like this to a comic or prose piece. But I just feel that falls flat saying really anything. Yes, I'm still feeling grumpy from you know what.

 

[systemcat]

For some reason DA is being very slow to load anything, so this site will see the most recently finished page first.

I refuse to write any of the good guys perfect which explains here Finn stealing from the bad guys.

Also other things. Has anyone checked out the latest link added to this place? I have no idea if anyone from the other end has wandered over here. If they have, they don't appear to have said anything.

 

[systemcat]

I am sorry if the pace at which I create these pages is feels too slow. Offline I'm dealing with a health problem and a car that is unsafe to drive in getting it repaired.

I finished this page last night but didn't want to post it here until I finished a second piece. While the second gap story is again prose based. If I have to describe The Contessa, I want to be working from looking at an image.

 

[systemcat]

I don't know if anyone is reading these pages. Is the idea of the second gap story something hated? Through here and DA I don't know. I ... graces I'm due for a test in a hospital soon and since my notes about health have passed by. I guess no one cares.

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

[/QUOTE]
You should take your time, your health comes first. Don’t overdo things it might make problems worse

 

[systemcat]

I have an unknown problem giving me intense chest pain and acid reflux. It's not the virus but in the very beginning I suspected that might have been it. It doesn't matter if I'm resting or walking, the pain strikes me bad and sometimes for hours at a time. Pain meds. don't help me much combat this. ( I mentioned this in the chat area lightly but no one read the comment. )

Day before yesterday I had blood work done which my doctor's office is awaiting the results from. He wants me to have some kind of test in a hospital after he gets the results of the blood work.

No one is following this story anymore I take it? .. No one has thoughts on the prose story in the works? ?

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

I think me, Lucy, and Claire are following it currently

 

[systemcat]

I only know when comments are said or reactions are given.
Again I am sorry for the pace of my uploads but I can't turn out pages fast if the pacing is why comments normally don't happen. I do feel in the dark about the other story shaping up as for people's thoughts.

 

[Julie Justice]

Hello systemcat.

I love your artwork and your writing; I think a lot of us here do, too.

I have fallen a bit behind in a lot of my on-line messages and postings this week, here, and elsewhere. But, I assure you, that has more to do with me, not making as good use of my time as I should have.

So, please continue to post things when they're ready and when you're able to. I for one, am looking forward to reading more in "A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield."

I know it can be frustrating, especially if a story has multiple parts, or if you've worked on something for a long time, and you don't get a response right away; but on the other hand, even if you don't get an immediate response to what you've posted, one of the good things about being on here, is that you can post as much as you like; but if you can't, for whatever reason, that's OK, too.

As I hope you've seen on here by now, people here care about and support each other, so please take care of yourself, get a handle on your medical problems, and feel better. I'm sending you my good thoughts and prayers ? ?.

I hope we hear from you soon, but until then, I can start catching up on my reading on here. ?

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

Spoken like a true Goddess of Justice.

 

[systemcat]

Hello systemcat.

I love your artwork and your writing; I think a lot of us here do, too.

I have fallen a bit behind in a lot of my on-line messages and postings this week, here, and elsewhere. But, I assure you, that has more to do with me, not making as good use of my time as I should have.

So, please continue to post things when they're ready and when you're able to. I for one, am looking forward to reading more in "A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield."

I know it can be frustrating, especially if a story has multiple parts, or if you've worked on something for a long time, and you don't get a response right away; but on the other hand, even if you don't get an immediate response to what you've posted, one of the good things about being on here, is that you can post as much as you like; but if you can't, for whatever reason, that's OK, too.

As I hope you've seen on here by now, people here care about and support each other, so please take care of yourself, get a handle on your medical problems, and feel better. I'm sending you my good thoughts and prayers ? ?.

I hope we hear from you soon, but until then, I can start catching up on my reading on here. ?

Thank you for explaining. Whenever I don't hear back from a person, when a lot of time has passes. I always blame myself in thinking I've said or done something wrong.

The second gap story won't be named after the first. In fact oddly I still haven't figured out a name for it. I guess why that is, is I've been putting all my creative energy into outlining and writing it. It in truth should still be in the outlining stage. But since all the major plot points have already been figured out. I hmm, got carried away last night detailing which led into writing.

Also I want to add in story-wise. Another story is brewing in my head in regards to the CS fandom, using the AU I write. Not exactly a gap story, this is simply set in the past but decades pass Snake Pit. This unknown one might not even happen. I can't say yet. But if it happens, it would be the first to flat out use Carmen as an active character.

Thank you for the concern but why did people breeze past my comment about health when I said I was concerned weeks back?