Chase

Director
Best answers
5
AMA
findcarmen.com
Known Aliases
Boss (situational)
Color #
536373
[Previously...]



9:08 AM Somewhere between San Francisco and Los Angeles.


Chase woke at 6:00 AM and immediately read the previous day’s reports. He reviewed the news, checked messages from international contacts, and completed a 2-hour morning routine.

A double shot of espresso later, he was driving down the highway from San Francisco towards LA for an evening conference.

An ‘unknown caller’ activated his in-car Bluetooth.

He pressed to pick up, “Devineaux.

Secured line please,” the contralto request wasn’t unusual.

Hold on,” he smiled and tapped a code on his linked communicator, “Right, we’re good.

She waited a few seconds more.

The weather in Buenos Aires was amicable,” she started.

He processed her clue, raised his brows and countered, “I see you did the thing.

I did,” a laugh was in her voice, “Thank you.

Chase nodded at the ‘thank you,’ despite knowing she would be blind to his action, “So what happened?

I gave him the locket,” her tone remained steady, “Only one of us knew the woman in it, and it wasn’t me.

Devineaux exhaled with some relief, she seemed happy, "Glad this ends well."

...And I was thinking,” her topic shifted, “Meet me in Nice? Let’s race down the Upper Corniche to Menton.

This weekend?” The weekends were busy along the Corniches and it was wiser to race either at night or before sunrise. He wanted to avoid traffic. The mention of Menton also reminded him of limoncello, and he could use some to restock the bar. He suggested, “I can do Saturday night, predawn Sunday, but I need to be in Brussels Monday afternoon.

Airport, Saturday night, I’ll have a car ready,” she ended the call.

With voice command, Chase connected to Renee Grovesnor.

Renee, free up my weekend? I need to take a flight to Nice, I’ll find my own way to Belgium.

“Certainly,” she affirmed, “You have a redundancies meeting with Organized Crimes this Friday morning, I’ll cancel?”

Move it to next week.

“Friday afternoon, a conference call with Milan?”

I’ll take that mid-trip.

“Saturday afternoon reviewing cadet performance at the airfield?”

Send Euge an apology, please.

“Yoga with Dr. Weller and his wife early Sunday morning?”

How... did I get invited into that?

“Last week’s dinner conversation,” Thankfully, Renee kept notes.

Cancel politely and send him a box of that gluten-free stuff he likes.

“Done, and...,” his assistant trailed, “Chase? There’s a Malcolm Avalon calling you, this is the second time in an hour, should I patch him through?”

Who?” Chase knew the answer to that question, but he was buying time.

“Malcolm Avalon,” Renee repeated, this time clearer, “He’s not a previous contact, I can relay--”

No, it’s fine, let him through.

As signals from Argentina rerouted through ACME and into Chase’s calibrated communicator, the indicating tones beeped an eternity.

Then came the silence.

Devineaux,” Chase reluctantly greeted.

“Director Devineaux,” there was a pause.

Yes, Mr. Avalon,” the detective apprehensively offered, “What can I do for you?

“I’ve been told, Mr. Devineaux,” Avalon was more forward, “that you are the man to contact if I want to find my daughter.”

Some things never end, Chase suddenly realized, they only get more complicated.


---

This concludes the 4-part journal entry, thanks for reading. If you do want this to continue, one way or another, put suggestions in the comments below. Feel free to give ideas.
 
Best answers
3
Color #
White
Well.. I'm sure we all remember the original eps of WoEiCS? that are the inspiration for this story, and even though it was a great story, I'm sure we all agree, we were frustrated by the fact that it was a "cliffhanger" (WoEiCS? was cancelled after that) and no one (not even Carmen) ever found out the answer. So, if you look it that way, any ending is better than mothing at all. ;) But, even if she doesn't say so, I think Carmen does want an answer to this question: otherwise she wouldn't have given him the locket. And I can't believe it's just a coincidence that Carmen tells Chase she gave Malcom Avalon the locket, right before Malcom Avalon calls Chase. Not saying how it should end..but yes, I would like to see some kind of ending to this. ;)
 

Tanya

Press Director
Best answers
0
Known Aliases
Yana, Tanya, Tanechka, TanYUchen'ka, TanyUs'ka
Color #
bb4d6d
All four parts were fun to read. Closing it up in a series of dialogs is interesting, considering how many words this thing started out with.
 

Chase

Director
Best answers
5
AMA
findcarmen.com
Known Aliases
Boss (situational)
Color #
536373
Yeah, it flowed slightly better via dialog, though I guess it did sound rushed in comparison to the beginning. Thanks for that, Tanya. Nice seeing you around.
 

Eartha

Personal Trainer
Best answers
0
Known Aliases
Earth, Edyth, EB, Sheila Rose
Color #
C17E00
Chase has a way with punch lines. He's in deep in this one, even before he realizes. Love it, you both! I want more.
 

Latest posts

Latest threads

New Journals

Neutral Grounds
Help Users
  • No one is chatting at the moment.
  • Quote Link
  • Polly Tix Polly Tix:
    Tenchi where are you…
    Quote Link
  • Tenchi Masaki Tenchi Masaki:
    At the office dealing with office life
    Quote Link
  • Tenchi Masaki Tenchi Masaki:
    At home dealing with home life
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    Hey, guys! Don't let the TikTok stuff distract you from the possibility of North Florida getting snow this week :D
    Quote Link
  • Jon Eckart Jon Eckart:
    How about a MMO (like World Of Warcraft) styled Carmen game? That would be interesting
    Quote Link
  • Jon Eckart Jon Eckart:
    Jade, I wasn't around when the rest of who you mentioned were here (aside from Chase... hope all is well for him), but miss them
    • Like
    Reactions: Jade
    Quote Link
  • Deric Storm Deric Storm:
    (Life tends to get in the way)
    Quote Link
  • Jade Jade:
    Jon Eckart said:
    Jade, I wasn't around when the rest of who you mentioned were here (aside from Chase... hope all is well for him), but miss them
    Don't worry, Jonny, you'll meet them someday.
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    Jon Eckart said:
    How about a MMO (like World Of Warcraft) styled Carmen game? That would be interesting
    you have good ideas and I like them but if the "no magical creatures That wouldn't be cannonical to the Carmen Sandiego universe." rule still stands then the answer would be no. Although when we do role plays for like everyone that's a big group thing.
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    but hey @Jon Eckart maybe if you want to play the magical creatures Carmen had a few like Nemoy, (an alien) or Mediva a medieval sourceress. Jacqueline Hyde has already been taken though. Those are the only ones that first come to mind. Why not talk to Tenchi about it?
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    One more thing Jon. You could write a Fanfiction with these characters. ( There was also a character named Sir VILE who I think could throw fire balls. At least in the gameshow of where in time)
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    PS: but if you play the Where in time people....there are limits. We can't use the time machine without permission
    Quote Link
  • Claire Yeon Claire Yeon:
    ((Perhaps it is because I am old, but I miss Carmen being a villain. She steals because she thinks it's fun and she likes proving she's smarter than everyone else. What an icon.))
    Quote Link
  • Claire Yeon Claire Yeon:
    ((Also, hello. It is good to be here again. Don't mind while I hang around for another 2-3 business days and then disappear for six months.))
    Quote Link
  • Laverna Laverna:
    Claire Yeon said:
    ((Also, hello. It is good to be here again. Don't mind while I hang around for another 2-3 business days and then disappear for six months.))
    hey hey
    Quote Link
  • Polly Tix Polly Tix:
    Claire Yeon said:
    ((Also, hello. It is good to be here again. Don't mind while I hang around for another 2-3 business days and then disappear for six months.))
    Hi whoever you are!
    • . . .
    Reactions: Tenchi Masaki
    Quote Link
  • Tenchi Masaki Tenchi Masaki:
    She is Claire Polly. Now mind your manners if you don’t want to face her cutting wit
    Quote Link
  • R :
    Guest Ruelle1 has joined the room.
  • R (Guest) Ruelle1:
    I would love to join the site, but I can't get a confirmation email sent
    Quote Link
  • Lucy Lucy:
    Hello there Ruelle welcome! Please be patient while this is worked out. :)
    Quote Link
  • R :
    Guest ruelle1 has joined the room.
  • R (Guest) ruelle1:
    Lucy said:
    Hello there Ruelle welcome! Please be patient while this is worked out. :)[/QUOTE ]
    Quote Link
  • R (Guest) ruelle1:
    Lucy said:
    Hello there Ruelle welcome! Please be patient while this is worked out. :)
    it’s a pleasure to meet your acquaintance, I am a student at the acme academy in the forensic science class.
    Quote Link
  • Emma Bezzle Emma Bezzle:
    Claire Yeon said:
    ((Also, hello. It is good to be here again. Don't mind while I hang around for another 2-3 business days and then disappear for six months.))
    Nice to see an old familiar face
    • Like
    Reactions: Tenchi Masaki
    Quote Link
    Emma Bezzle Emma Bezzle: ((Also, hello. It is good to be here again. Don't mind while I hang around for another 2-3...
    • Like
    Reactions: Tenchi Masaki
    Top