Plot Line B?

[systemcat]

I'll say my comments about this page and other things if people would like me to??

 

[systemcat]

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[Tenchi Masaki]

What did you think about the character interaction that was conveyed?

 

[systemcat]

Very tried right now. I should be asleep. Um, what exactly do you mean?

( About to crash on bed. You'll see tomorrow what I was up late working on. ... Really blending Clip Studio & Bryce back and forth is not an easy task. ...? )

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

Are the characters your writing/drawing expressing the story the way you see it in your head?

 

[systemcat]

... I am sorry if my illustrations aren't being satisfactory here ?. I did have comments about the most recent pages posted but there isn't an interest in reading them.

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

I asked if you think readers are understanding your writing/drawing the story the way you want them too. If you make a scene do you think people get the story your telling by reading what your writing or seeing your drawings?

 

[systemcat]

For people not often saying their thoughts on a scene, I don't know.

Again, I feel I'm letting you down with my illustrations.

 

[Tenchi Masaki]

Well you aren’t they are really good. When I write a story I’m worried people won’t get what I’m writing the way I want them to. Its hard to find the right words for certain story moments.

 

[systemcat]

Thank you for clearing that up. I try my best with every page to keep up a quality standard.

Still eager for your next work when that happens.

Guess no one wants the details surrounding the last two pages huh? ... ... If this section has felt boring to people. It has one more page before it switches back over to plot line C.
Sheesh, Tenchi remember how long ago in PM we chatted about plot line C coming up to it's next installment?

For my writing and this applies to prose more than comic presentation. To insure everything comes out right means an outline which could spread over more than one file. A first shot not even really a draft with normally just the characters talking with mild visual descriptions added in. Then a first draft where everything is written in full. But even then by the next day changes are normally made. Then the second draft where the start to polishing the story happens. Lastly a third draft in which anything remaining some how missed before, is altered for the best prestation. ... One story had over ten major outline revisions done to it. Do I need to say which? ( Faints at remembering the process. )

 

[systemcat]

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[Everly]

I like the alphabet you made. It looks interesting.