@Glory S Thank you for the offer but that's almost over. For me proof reading beyond grammar and spelling is also removing unneeded text and maybe replacing some of it. @Tenchi Masaki thank you for saying your input.
You know, I think the Netflix Carmen would have been better if they had done good flashbacks. Carmen was a teen right? Why not do flashbacks of when Carmen and Chase were partners and working together? Or when Chase was chasing Carmen? Or more about when Carmen quit?