@Glory S Thank you for the offer but that's almost over. For me proof reading beyond grammar and spelling is also removing unneeded text and maybe replacing some of it. @Tenchi Masaki thank you for saying your input.
"Napoleon attacked by rabbits" so I had to go google search it. "The story of Napoleon being "defeated" by rabbits during a hunt in 1807 is a humorous anecdote, but it's not a confirmed historical fact, though it is mentioned in General Thiébault's memoirs. "