Jade's Fairy Tale Stories

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(Chapter six)

(Continuing with Red Rider)

?: Don't be afraid young lady,I'm here to help you.
Red Rider: Who are you?
?: Why I'm just a stranger on my way back home.
Red Rider: I'm going to see my grandfather he's sick with the cold and now I have to find which way to get to his house.
?: Well I wanted you to take this road.
Red Rider: The short road my friends warn not to go there they told me to go to the long road but I'll get lost there.
?: That might lead you to nowhere why don't you do yourself a favor and get yourself a drink (the stranger gave Red Rider money) so that way you won't get dehydrated when heading for the long road then again take the short road it's better that way.
Red Rider: Okay,I've figure I'm thirsty anyway.
?: There's a soda shop nearby get yourself a chocolate malt it's the best around.
Red Rider: Thank you so much (Red Rider rides away with her bike)

Narrator: Red Rider never realized that talk to a mysterious stranger not knowing it's B.B. Wolfe...so B.B. Wolfe take the short road and headed for Red Rider's grandfather's house...where grandfather is preparing his favorite tea using a tea kettle to boil the water when grandfather heard the doorbell ring...
(Grandpa (Chief/Dr.Weller) opens the door)
B.B. Wolfe: Hello old man!
Grandpa: Good Heavens!
Narrator: Thank goodness for Grandpa he hides in the closet trying not to get eaten by B.B.Wolfe who is trying to break the door as much as he could...in the meantime Red Rider returned saw that the stranger she talk to is gone so she heads for the short road.

Mr. Samurai (who was hiding behind the bushes): Oh my!
Hunter: (Also hiding behind the bushes) What now?
Mr. Samurai: She's heading for trouble!
Hunter: Come on Mr. Samurai we have no time to lose.

Narrator: Red Rider have arrived to her grandfather's house just in time she knock on the door...while B.B. Wolfe struggled to get the closet door open...
B.B.Wolfe: *gasped* (decided to dress from a crook to an old man by changing his suit and hat into a nightshirt and a sleep cap and jump unto bed)*clears his throat* (old man's voice) Come in! The door's open.

(Red Rider enter with her basket)

Red Rider: Hello Grandpa!
B.B. Wolfe: (old man's voice) Red Rider,I never thought to see you.
Red Rider: I made some shortbread cookies for your tea and two oranges from Mr. Samurai!
B.B. Wolfe: (old man's voice) Thank you dear!
Red Rider: Why Grandpa what big ears you got there?
B.B. Wolfe: The better to hear!
Red Rider: Why Grandpa what big eyes you got there?
B.B. Wolfe: Oh the better to see!
Red Rider: *gasped when recognizing the face* Grandpa what a horrible smile you got there?
B.B. Wolfe: (in a normal voice) Oh the better to get you!
(The tea kettle blows Red Rider grab a bucket and throws the ciders and ashes unto B.B. Wolfe) I can't see! Where did you go? Where did you go? (Red Rider throws a bucket of hot water unto B.B. Wolfe's face) Ouch!

Red Rider(Uses a broom to whack B.B. Wolfe): Take that and that you mean old wolf...you lied to me about a soda shop that takes me to nowhere.

Narrator: B.B. Wolfe was angry and broke the broom when he was about to get Red Rider all of the sudden Hunter just kick the door down.

Red Rider: Hunter!
Hunter: I'm here Red Rider!
Narrator: While Hunter and B.B. Wolfe start wrestling each other...Grandpa got out of his closet and Red Rider came to him....Mr. Samurai just throws a bushels of corn on the cob onto B.B. Wolfe's pants (which is underneath his nightshirt).
Mr. Samurai: Hunter,led the wolf to the stove!
Narrator: and Hunter did!
B.B. Wolfe: *screamed and ran as the corn just started popping*

Narrator: Thanks to Hunter he's lucky to be there...Red Rider and Grandpa is happy and does Mr. Samurai as for B.B. Wolfe yup he's behind bars for good.

(the story ended)

Jade's house

Jade place her story 'Red Rider' onto her pink folder with the rest of her fairy tale story.

"Wow! I hope another story will come again."

(end of Chapter six)
 

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(Chapter Seven)

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'Locks of Love...a fairy tale character who has long hair will be happy if kids have a wig from her hair.' Jade finished reading the note..."That fairy tale character with long hair that's definitely Rapunzel...and Tatiana is perfect for Rapunzel,Medeva is one Gothel and I better put Zack in Rapunzel as a prince."

Rapunzel

Based on the story by the Brothers Grimm (I don't own the story)

Characters
Narrator(Jade)
Rapunzel(Tatiana)
Gothel(Medeva)
Prince(Zack)



(the story begins)

Narrator: Once upon a time there lived a witch whose named Gothel and a beautiful girl named Rapunzel who has the most beautiful golden hair...Rapunzel wants to see everything but Gothel would not allow her to go see everything so she locked Rapunzel in a tower with no stairs or a ladder to get up and down not even a door...Rapunzel lives in the tower since she was twelve years old and as the years passed everyday in the same tower.

The Tower

Gothel(Medeva): Rapunzel,Rapunzel,let down your hair,so that I may climb that golden stair.
Rapunzel(Tatiana): Oh here I go again!
Narrator: Oh yeah the reason why Gothel put Rapunzel for...It's Rapunzel's fine long hair of spun gold and yes it's seventy feet long...Gothel climb up to the tower.

Rapunzel: Oh Gothel, I've been reading a book about crocheting.
Gothel: Oh I might need sweater but no feather.
Rapunzel: The problem is I can't go a school of arts and crafts it's really far away I really want to see it.
Gothel: (angrily) Toads and snails with a puppy dog's tail...I won't allow you to attend there because you will fail...now where is that pail?
Rapunzel: there! (Gothel grab the pail)
Gothel: Rapunzel,let down your hair so that I can get down from your stair.
Rapunzel: Yes,ma'am! (tears roll down from her eyes)

Narrator: Poor Rapunzel,that Gothel is always is keeping her away from anybody of seeing her...don't you just hate it?

The Next Day...
Narrator: Rapunzel was singing a song while cleaning up her room...and then there was a prince who was listening to Rapunzel until...
Gothel: Rapunzel,Rapunzel,let down your hair,so that I may climb that golden stair.
Narrator: As soon as Gothel got up to the tower...the prince heard the words.

The Tower
Gothel: I brought you some food from my house thank goodness there's no mouse.
Rapunzel: I was wondering could have some friends to visit me I want to get to know them and they know me.
Gothel: Rapunzel,I forbid you to have a friend here because there they always be nowhere! Rapunzel
Rapunzel: Yes,ma'am!

Narrator: after Gothel left the tower Rapunzel is still sad and yet still sings a song.
Prince(Zack): Hey Rapunzel,Rapunzel,let down your hair,so I may climb that golden stair.
Rapunzel: Very well!
Narrator: And she thought it was Gothel was really the Prince
Rapunzel: Oh my!
Prince: Calm down Rapunzel!
Rapunzel: You're a stranger please leave.
Prince: No wait Rapunzel figure you need a friend to meet you.
Rapunzel: Alright!
Prince: You know I like to tell a story.
Rapunzel: Oh I love stories
Prince: You never heard about this story...years ago a couple who are very poor seeking out for a job and a place to stay somehow the wife was sick and has a child...the husband but to go find food to save his wife and his child who is not yet born...and so he did from a lady who a lovely veggie garden at least he ask first.
Rapunzel: So the wife is alright
Prince: Yeah but sadly she passed on but the husband has no choice to give his beautiful baby girl to a lady who gave him a head of lamb's lettuce or corn salad.
Rapunzel: That was very sad.
Prince: I know...I better go,Rapunzel
Rapunzel: Alright! (Rapunzel puts her hair down so the prince can climb down from the tower)

Narrator: Rapunzel is happy to see the prince for the first time...so he leaves Rapunzel alone and returns to his palace for the rest of the day.

(end of Chapter Seven)
 

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(Chapter Eight)

(continuing with Rapunzel)

Narrator: The next day the prince is waiting for Gothel to come down from the tower just to see Rapunzel...and he did.

Prince: Rapunzel,Rapunzel let down your hair,so that I may climb the golden stair. (Rapunzel bring her hair down and the prince climbed up the tower)

Rapunzel: Why hello again what are you doing here?
Prince: What's it look like,Rapunzel I've got a present for you.
Rapunzel: What ever it is I can't accept it.
Prince: Trust me (As Prince hands over Rapunzel a silver hairbrush)
Rapunzel: a hairbrush?!?!
Prince: for your hair Rapunzel!
Rapunzel: That's nice thank you!
Gothel: (Voice only) Rapunzel!
Rapunzel: Oh no!
Prince: (quietly) now what?
Rapunzel: (quietly) hide! (the prince hide behind the curtains)
Narrator: Gothel return to the tower thanks to Rapunzel's hair.
Gothel: I almost forgot something.
Rapunzel: What's that?
Gothel: Sugar and spice and everything nice, need some cinnamon sticks make it twice...hmm...
Rapunzel: Oh what?
Gothel: Someone is the tower I'm afraid someone might steal my power...wait a minute! (Gothel looks behind the curtains and found the Prince)
Prince: *screamed*
Gothel: (To Rapunzel) How dare you brought a stranger people like him that I warned you of the danger.
Rapunzel: He's never danger he wouldn't hurt me (Gothel grab Rapunzel's hairbrush)
Narrator: In her anger Gothel crush Rapunzel's hairbrush into pieces and knock the prince down to the floor.

Eight hours later

The Tower

Prince: (after waking up) Rapunzel,where are you?
Gothel: Looking for her (Gothel shows the prince Rapunzel's braided hair and a pair of scissors...the prince gasped) You never see her again.
Prince: No how could you?
Gothel: I've been hiding her for a long time no rhyme.
Prince: What do you mean?
Gothel: You told her the story about her parents...It's true I was the lady who gave the lettuce to her father to save her mother but alas her father has gone blue.
Prince: So the question is what happened to her father?
Gothel: After he gave up his only child so tender and mild...he's just sad and feeling bad,he's not mad nor a dad in other words he's passed away in one day. (laughing out loud after dropping the braided hair and the scissors)

Narrator: And Gothel throws the prince from the tower to a whitewater rapid river....The Prince is struggled to survive swimming the river when all the sudden the Prince grabs a strong vine to lift himself to safety...unfortunately the Prince end up blinded.

Somewhere in the Wilderness

Narrator: The Prince walked on to find the way back to the castle but he couldn't and searching for Rapunzel is nowhere until he hears something...better yet someone.

Prince: Rapunzel?!?! (Prince while blinded saw a vision of an old lady)
Rapunzel: Yes!
Prince: I was wondering I'm looking for a girl singing.
Rapunzel: Oh dear you're blinded (Rapunzel's tears drop unto the Prince's eyes which restore his sight and saw the vision of an old lady who turned out to be Rapunzel whose hair is cut very short)
Prince: Rapunzel
Rapunzel: I'm sorry dear Prince,I'm sorry I got you involved in this.
Prince: It's okay Rapunzel! (Prince kiss Rapunzel)
Narrator: And all of the sudden Rapunzel's hair grows in a normal length.
(Prince and Rapunzel laughing with joy and happiness)
Narrator: For Rapunzel she was so happy to be free and see the world with the prince at her side but for Gothel well...she got caught alright and yes she's ends up in the tower because the whole kingdom knew she was lying about everything...And so Rapunzel and the Prince got married and later on they got a boy and a girl as twins.

(end of Chapter Eight)
 
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Wow..When I was a little girl in school, my hair was so long, people used to call me "Rapunzel." LOL. Well..I grew up a long time ago...but my hair is still long, compared to most people. But not that long though. LOL!! I always thought that Tatiana and Zack made a good couple too. ;)
 

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Wow..When I was a little girl in school, my hair was so long, people used to call me "Rapunzel." LOL. Well..I grew up a long time ago...but my hair is still long, compared to most people. But not that long though. LOL!! I always thought that Tatiana and Zack made a good couple too. ;)
Well better than my nickname, mine was encyclopedia brown after the book character. That nickname has never left me at all.
 

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Encyclopedia Brown?!?! That character is created and writer by Donald J. Sobol (October 4,1924-July 11,2012)

Encyclopedia Brown's first name is Leroy
his father is the Chief of The Police in Idaville (which is a fictional city in Maine,not Indiana,Pennsylvania or Oregon that has the same name) and his mother is an English Teacher.
his enemies are the Tigers (a bunch of neighborhood bullies) and a con-artist named Wilford Wiggins.
His own agency starts with a quarter (.25) plus expenses...No case too small.
his partner is Sally Kimball (a girl and a bodyguard)

I know Invader why don't you try make a crossover with that character...because I did crossover with Casper the Friendly Ghost,Kim Possible and Scooby-Doo.:halo:
 

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Jade your writings are beautiful. Keep up the good work. I love how well you match the characters personalities to the stories. I can totally see Carmen as little red.
 

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(Chapter nine)

After Jade return from grocery shopping there she saw a note stick on her front door...

"Mirror,Mirror?!?!" said Jade after reading the note.

"Of course it's from Snow White and Julie Justice is beautiful to be in my version of the story...Contessa well,she's the evil Queen instead of a stepmother why not the evil Queen become her stepsister...The Prince well Spencer is the choice because I remembered he met Julie from outside the lab and he seems to have a crush on Julie well the seven dwarfs are really just seven dwarfs...I better get writing."

Snow White

Based on the story by the Brothers Grimm.(I don't own the story)

Characters
Narrator(Jade)
Snow White(Julie Justice,a non-canon character in whom I ask permission first so everyone knows)
The Queen (Contessa)/The Peddler (Sara Bellum)
The Magic Mirror (Frank M. Postor)
The Prince (Spencer Ross,a character that I created myself)
The Huntsman (Lars Vegas)

The Seven Dwarfs(unknown)
Red (red dwarf),Tangerine(orange dwarf),Mellow (yellow dwarf),Forrest (green dwarf),Skye (blue dwarf),Indigo (indigo dwarf) and Thistle (violet-purple dwarf)

Narrator: Once upon a time there a lovely princess named Snow White...her stepsister has become the Queen of her kingdom...however Snow White was forced to wear rags and become her servant because the Queen feared that Snow White might outwit her own beauty someday.

(The story begins)

The Royal Palace

Narrator: One day a new mirror has arrive for the Queen...
Queen(Contessa): My new mirror it's beautiful I can't wait to see my beauty to be seen.
Narrator: And then something just happened...
Mirror (Frank): Ah! what is your question?
Queen: Mirror,mirror on the wall who is the fairest one of all.
Mirror: Without a doubt you are the fairest one of all.
Queen: Oh thank you!
Mirror: My pleasure...(started to grinned and laughed quietly)

Narrator: As years gone by the Queen is happy to be the fairest one of all...but a surprise will come to her.
Queen: Slave in the mirror let me see your face.
Mirror: What is your question,my Queen?
Queen: Mirror,mirror on the wall who is the fairest one of all.
Mirror: Oh dear how embracing to tell you,my Queen someone is fairer than you.
Queen: Who is she?
Mirror: The rags never lies...by her beauty of her brown eyes...her lips are red as roses,her hair dark as ebony and skin is fair and true.
Queen: *gasped* Snow White!

Narrator: Yes my friends there was Snow White grown up and very beautiful indeed and then all the sudden a prince to the palace.

Prince(Spencer): Oh hello!
Snow White(Julie): Oh hi,are you looking for somebody?
Prince: Just wondering where I can find the most beautiful girl in the whole kingdom.
Snow White: Oh my I'm...just a servant girl.
Prince: *laughed* a servant girl?!?!
Snow White: I mean my name is Snow White.
Prince: Snow White what a beautiful name.
(Snow White saw the Queen who looks at the window)
Snow White: Oh my! I better go! Goodbye! (Snow White ran)
Prince: Wait Snow White...I better go as well the Queen will call the guards.(The Prince leaves the palace)

The Royal Palace

Narrator: The Queen has summoned one of the Huntsmen...boy I feel that something's not right...

Queen: I want to take Snow White to a forest so she can pick wildflowers.
Huntsman(Lars): Yes your majesty!
Queen: And there you must kill her!
Huntsman: *gasped and surprised* Are you crazy you got the wrong huntsman I'm outer here! (The Huntsman is about to leave the door slam shut in front of his face)
Queen: You know the penalty if you failed.
Huntsman: *gulped* Whatever you say your majesty!
Queen: Bring back her heart in this box and the lungs and liver bring it in a sack(The Queen gave the Huntsman,a box with heart)
Huntsman: Yes Your Majesty!
(End of Chapter Nine)
 
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(Chapter Ten)

(Continuing with Snow White)

Narrator: The Huntsman brought to a good place to pick wildflowers he told Snow White (in a nice outfit that is) that is perfect for the Queen's table...so she started picking...and then he pulls out his dagger walks closer and closer to Snow White.

Snow White: Huh!(she turns around and screamed)
Huntsman: No,no,I can't do it!(Huntsman put back his dagger)
Snow White: What's wrong? Why are trying to kill me?
Huntsman: I was following orders by the Queen I don't know why but you must not come back to the palace just hide somewhere in the forest real deep she won't find you okay?(Huntsman started to cry)
Snow White: Alright,I'll go!
Narrator: And Snow White run into a deep forest...until she stop running no more and fell asleep...the next day Snow White woke up and saw something nice.

Snow White: a cottage I hope the owner if I stay there.
Narrator: she knocked on the door no one was home...suddenly the door opened after knocking.
Snow White: Oh my what a mess hmm...I know I better clean this place.
Narrator: And she got started meanwhile around a mountain there are seven miners who are about four feet tall and ten inches digging up for diamonds...

Dwarfs (six of the seven dwarfs): (singing)We are the seven dwarfs digging for diamonds and no more...let's get to know ourselves.
Red: I'm Red and I'm the leader and wearing red.
Tangerine: I'm Tangerine and wearing orange
Mellow: I'm Mellow and wearing yellow
Forrest: I'm Forrest and green is what I'm wearing.
Skye: I'm Skye and I always wear blue
Indigo: I'm Indigo and I wear well...indigo.
Red: And last but not least this is Thistle,he doesn't talk but he wear violet
Forrest: You mean purple.
Red: Violet
Forrest: Purple
Skye: Hey,hey let's not fight over this again he's good as it is.
Narrator: and then the dwarfs finished their work day,time to put away everything and go home for a day.

Narrator: Meanwhile in the cottage Snow White finished cleaning the house and then she tired and there she saw seven small beds.
Snow White: *yawned* I am sleeping I better rest (as she falls in three beds)
Narrator: The Seven Dwarfs return home only to realize their surprised.

Red: What the...The house it's been lit.
Forrest: That can't be unless one of you forgot to turn it off.
Mellow: No way,Forrest!
Tangerine: Don't look at me there's somebody in our house.
Red: Tangerine's right let's check it out and try to be quiet.

Narrator: The dwarfs enter the house only to be seen it's been clean up and they went upstairs enter the bedroom...

(yawned)
(Dwarfs screamed)
Snow White: (just woke up) Huh! What's going on?
Dwarfs: Huh!
Red: Why hello!
Snow White: Hello why you all are little men.

Forrest: and you're a girl.
Red: allow us to introduce ourselves...I'm Red
Tangerine: Tangerine
Mellow: Mellow
Forrest: Forrest is the name
Skye: I'm Skye
Indigo: I'm Indigo and this is Thistle,he doesn't speak.
Snow White: Oh I'm sorry!
Forrest: He's muted ever since he was born.

Red: What is your name dear?
Snow White: I'm Snow White
Red: The Princess,what brings you here?
Snow White: Hiding out from someone.
Mellow: Who?
Snow White: my stepsister
Dwarfs: The Queen
Forrest: Oh here we go again that queen is trouble...better yet make it a double.
Skye: She's trouble

Indigo: And it's all because of a magic mirror
Snow White: magic mirror?!?!
Indigo: It's true the magic mirror has imprisoned an evil magician he can lied to anybody even the Queen.
Skye: Oh that's nonsense,Indigo!
Forrest: It's just a rumor,that's all!
Indigo: Oh brother,will no one listen to me?

Red: beside,Princess you are here to stay until further notice.
Snow White: Oh thank you all!

(end of Chapter Ten)
 

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