The Radio Show?

[systemcat]

I'm not 100% sure this is the right place for this topic, so mods. move if need be. The reason I'm not going with the Writer's Loft is this isn't story content directly.

There is one aspect I've written thinly on so far for Snake Pit and in the end, it will be better defined. My prose writing tends to go through evolving drafts and what I'd like community thoughts on, happens around the beginning. The note Patrick is listening to a radio program while doing his work.

What type of program is he listening to? I want to have it as an entertainment one and at that use the names of crooks from both game shows.

This plot aspect isn't meant to have any kind of dominance in the story.

 

[systemcat]

Well yesterday I finished draft one which now means draft two is adding in detailed which I failed to in the first one and the start of proof checking. ... Because no one spoke up well I just went forward with inventing this piece in the beginning. There is even a commercial tied into the idea.
... Hope people like the piece. ?