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Invader

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This is a dream that came to me the only one I own is me. I will say this was a very lucid dream that represents a part of me that was forgotten. I wont reveal whom was the other person in the dream though. Though I will say something they said touched me deeply, and helped some long pent up guilt fall away.

It is another moment of eternity that she stands in the iron building with out doors, it is frozen in place amidst the icy mountains. The twin daggers of sorrow and guilt serve to hold her in place, one to paralyze, the other rooting her to the spot. How long she has sent herself to this icy waste she does not even remember. It was long ago she condemned herself here, in this forsaken icy midst. Despite the sun and moon the world here is forever frozen and lifeless, her body is protected from the cold but she moves not.

To touch her would to be touching a glacier, her very tears have long sense frozen. Even the comfort that tears once wrought her is denied, as any comfort is not welcome in this existence. This place is all she knows know having denied herself the warmth of human contact, and secondly to ease the pain of her aching heart. Out in the distance a figure approaches sensing sorrow and guilt. His name is unknown, why he is here he knows not, but knows that the building before him holds a soul in distress and denial. Approaching the building it looks like a box covered in iron bands , that circle it and there is neither doors nor windows.

Touching the side he finds he can walk through them as though they were a mist. Inside he sees a figure , who is standing frozen and senses great sorrow. The sorrow radiates from the paralyzed figure in icy wafts. Approaching it he sees two daggers in their heart and removes one, breaking the icy spell that paralyzed it. The figure is startled to find herself being able to move again and can't understand why they did this.

"What brings you to this forsaken place? " Invader asks barely whispering.
" You need help, there is no need to hold onto such great guilt. " The figure replies sternly.
" The roots are vast and deep, I don't know if I can ever remove them all" Invader sighs hopelessly. "They have grown sense I first came here long ago."
" You need to , the roots are poisoning you" The figure intones while grasping her hand. "This will hurt greatly but will be better for you"


Invaders hand is closed upon the dagger , and the figure helps her to tug at it , great roots emerge from it as it is pulled away. Invader wants to scream but she is paralyzed, and her voice is mute. The roots seem long, endless, and deep, until the very last is pulled from her heart. She collapses unto her knees ,expecting to die at any moment. The roots are covered in dirt and blood that is stained with a sickening green color. The figure pulls out a flak that is small , brown, and made of leather, the figure uncorks it.


" This is the truth it will burn like nothing else but it will set you free" Reassures the figure. "The soil of your heart is still good. " It continues, pouring the liquid into the remains of her heart.

Liquid pours into the wounds, invader feels a burning like thousands of shards of fire are emerging within her heart. Eventually the wounds are healed, but scars take their place. The figure then takes some seeds and plants them.

" These are the seeds of courage, wisdom, and hope, I plant them in your heart to help you through what is to come." Intones the figure sternly.

The figure then drapes a dark green cloak over invader who is still on her knees, and helps her to her feet.

"Never again will you be a prisoner here!" Intones the figure.
" How shall I leave, and where do I go ? " Ponders invader nervously.
"We shall walk though the walls , no longer will this place bind you." The figure Replies leading her to the walls.

The two of them slowly walk though the walls, that dissolve like mist before them. Once outside the mountains of ice slowly start to change into great forests, streams, and valleys. The whole world outside is changing all at once and invader stares in wonder as her rescuer vanishes. Not knowing where they have gone to invader turns to look behind her to find the iron building gone as if it never were. All of this seems like some sort of dream that could not possibly be real. Though she does wonder who that was , where they have gone to, and she wants to know how they found her.

I woke up after this.
 
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