Jade's Fairy Tale Stories

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(I don't own the characters from every Carmen Sandiego series whatsoever or any fairy tale characters as well)

Prologue

Jade's House

Jade Ezell and her cat,Sam are relaxing after a hard clue to solve for ACME's sake
There she got a letter which is addressed is unknown
"*Jade reading the letter* 'Jade,I want you create a book with fairy tales and make it good than the authors do.'"
"What do you think,Sam should I do it?" she asked and Sam meowed "Well okay then!"
*the doorbell rang*
Jade open the door and there was a delivery man..."Chinese dinner for Jade?!?!"
"I'm her...wait a minute I didn't order Chinese!" said Jade after the delivery man gave her the food
"It's on the house!" said the delivery man "Don't forget your fortune cookie!"
"Thank you!" said Jade after the delivery man gave her a fortune cookie and the delivery man left.
Inside the food that the delivery man gave Jade are grilled Teriyaki Chicken,Beef with Broccoli and steamed brown rice however she got a note it said: 'opened Fortune Cookie first.'

And Jade did...Sam meowed "Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum! That's one weird fortune unless...My first story deals with Jack and the Beanstalk...Sam, it's time for me to write my own version of Jack and the Beanstalk...Now who can be Jack?...of course,the name Jack rhymes with Zack! Now the Giant should be strong and tall instead of a guy why not a girl like a Giantess named Eartha Brute of course...I probably need Ivy in this story instead of a mother why not a sister and the one sold the cow for magic beans is Vic-The-Slick...This is going to be one Jack and the Beanstalk story I ever wrote I better get started." said Jade.

(end of Prologue)
 

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(Chapter One)

Jack and the Beanstalk (based on 'English Fairy Tales' by Joseph Jacobs in 1890 originally from Benjamin Tabart in 1807 in which I don't own the story whatsoever)

Narrator(Jade)
Jack (Zack Monaghan)
Jack's sister (Ivy Monaghan)
The Salesman (Vic The Slick)
The Giantess (Eartha Brute)

Narrator: Once Upon a Time there lived a young man named Jack who lives with his older sister although they are poor they tried to make money by milking the cow...Unfortunately the cow can't make anymore milk they have no choice but to sell the cow to the farmer's market...so one day...

(the story begins)

the Countryside

(Jack (Zack) along with the cow on their way to the farmer's market)

Jack: (to the cow) Don't worry Missy you better off making milk there than with us. (the cow mooed)

(The Salesman (Vic) came to Jack)

Salesman: Well,well where are you going?
Jack: I'm going to the farmer's market to sell off the cow.
Salesman: Why can't you take the cow to the meat market?
Jack: Because my cow is too skinny to become hamburger.
Salesman: Tell what I'm going to do...I'll take the cow and you can have these (as he shows Jack three beans)
Jack: Beans no way!
Salesman: These are no ordinary beans they're magic beans.
Jack: Magic Beans?
Salesman: Sure you might as well make money out of these what do you say?
Jack: Deal (Jack give the cow to the salesman)

Narrator: Then one night as Jack went home...his sister was waiting for him with a good wealth.
(Jack came home)
Sister(Ivy): Well did you get the money?
Jack: Better than that,sis these beans will get us enough money.(as Jack shows his sister the three magic beans)
Sister: What kind of beans are they?
Jack: They're magic beans!
Sister: You sell the cow for these worthiness beans...Give me that (grabs the three magic beans out of Jack's hand) thanks to you neither one of us gets a bite to eat. (Jack's sister throws the three magic beans to the ground)

Narrator: With his sister's frustration,Jack was sad so he and his sister went to bed...the next day the sunrises....
Jack: (shouted) Wake up,sis! (Jack's sister woke up)
Sister: Now what,Jack? (as she out of bed)
Jack: Take a look outside! (As Jack's sister saw and a big,huge beanstalk)
Sister: Oh my gosh! How did the beanstalk get so big?
Jack: You threw out the magic beans last night.
Sister: (gasped) The only question where does it lead?
Jack: Only one way to find out let's climb that beanstalk.

Narrator: So Jack and his sister climb up all the way to the top of the beanstalk...
(Jack and his sister saw something on a giant cloud)
Jack: Wow! A castle! Let's check it out,sis!
Sister: (as she saw Jack heading for the castle) Jack,wait for me.
Narrator: Jack and his sister came to the castle...
Jack: Whoa! This castle is so gigantic!
Sister: Tell me about it!
Jack: Let's find out who knows we could find some treasure.

Narrator: so Jack and his sister enter the castle seeing everything so big they have to look around until they hear something or someone coming with a stomp of it's feet...
Giantess (Eartha): Hmm!...Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum! I smell a boy and a girl! If I find them they are grill
Jack and Sister: *gasped* The Giantess!
Giantess: Where are they?...(Giantess look around for Jack and Sister) Oh well nevermind! (The Giantess stomp away)
Jack: Whew! That was close!
Sister: Too close!

Giantess: (in the other room) Hey Goldie lay some eggs and I mean golden eggs.
Narrator: Goldie who is in fact a goose...The Giantess is waiting for the goose to lay golden eggs.
(Goldie honked)
Giantess: What do you mean you can't lay gold eggs?
(Goldie honked)
Giantess: Why you,you dumb goose! Lay those eggs now!...(Giantess turn her head to the harp) Alright harp played your music to make me happy.

Narrator: And the harp played the music itself to keep the Giantess relax while Jack and his sister enter the room and they climb and so they went up the table...
Jack: Sis look!
Narrator: Jack and his sister saw not only Goldie the goose but on the table there are lots of gold coins are on the table as well.
Sister: Wow! These's plenty of those to used to pay off everything.
Jack: Let's take it while the Giantess is asleep.
Narrator: Jack and his sister are grabbing as much gold coins as they can.
(Goldie honked)
Jack: Shh! You want to escape,Goldie?
(Goldie honked)
Sister: Does she lay gold eggs?
Jack: No way,sis,come on!
(Goldie honked as Jack grab her to safety)
Narrator: All the sudden the Giantess is awake and saw everything except the harp are gone...
Giantess: (angrily) Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum! Give me back what you took!
Jack and Sister: The Giantess! (Screamed as they ran out of the castle with the gold coins and the goose)

Narrator: Jack and his sister head back to the beanstalk by sliding down...not knowing the Giantess is following them...Jack and his sister hide the gold coins and the goose in their home.
Jack: The Giantess is coming!
Sister: Oh no she's not! (As she grabbed an axe and started chopping down the beanstalk)
Jack: (shouted) Timber!!!!!!!!
Giantess: (noticing the beanstalk is about to be fall) Uh-oh! (screamed as the beanstalk breaks and the Giantess gets plunge in a big lake)
Narrator: That Giantess is down but out cold as an iceberg and every people in the village saw a rain of gold coins coming down on them the Giantess has been sent to the prison house after the people notice her already...And Jack and his sister were happy and rich and yes they lived happily ever after.

(the story ended)

Jade finished the story...
"Well Sam what do you think?" Jade asked as Sam meowed
"At the least the story!"
(the phone rings)
Jade picked the phone and said "Hello! Yeah Sam is a good boy,mom! Okay I'll see you later bye!" and Jade hang up the phone "Well Sam it's time for you go home...as for me I'll put the story of Jack and the Beanstalk to the 'fairy tale' folder." as Jade place her story in the pink folder and she's hoping another fairy tale story will come soon.

(end of Chapter one)
 
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(Chapter two)

Jade's house

After Jade check her mail there was a note card after opening an envelope...

'You're invited to be as yourself in a story where there's a royal ball hosted by a prince who searches a bride for his kingdom...a fairy godmother to help you.'

"Me,a royal ball and a prince whose looking for a bride...sounds like Cinderella...since I'm Cinderella whose Prince Charming? Lee Jordan of course,and a mean stepsister like Sarah Nade and a fairy godmother is gotta be Renee Santz...I better this story started."

Cinderella (Based on the story by Giambattista Basile in 1634,Charles Perrault in 1697 and the Brothers Grimm in 1812 I don't own the story whatsoever)

Narrator/Cinderella (Jade)
The Prince (Lee Jordan)
Fairy Godmother (Renee Santz)
Stepsister (Sarah Nade)
The Royal Valet (Cruiser)
The Townspeople,The guests at the ball (Unknown)

(The story begins)

Narrator: Once upon a time there lived a sweet,smart,lovely young lady named Cinderella who lives with her mean stepsister who always boss her around by doing chores without any help at all...

Stepsister's house
(Cinderella (Jade) who dressed in a brown ragged dress while scrubbing the pots and pans as fast as hard as she could with a soap pad in the kitchen)
*Trumpet blows from outside*
Cinderella: I wonder what's going on? (Cinderella opens the window)

Narrator: As the townspeople gather the Royal Valet (Cruiser) came.
Valet: Ladies and gentlemen,After being rejected by every since princess who came to this kingdom to be our prince's wife...our prince has no choice to choose an eligible lady to be our prince's bride he hosted a ball tomorrow night, (The Townspeople cheers)
(Cinderella closes the window and start sweeping the floor when the Stepsister enter the kitchen)
Stepsister (Sarah): Cinderella,You better get me ready to the ball tomorrow night.
Cinderella: Mind if I come?
Stepsister: Certainly not,you're not only messy but you're not good enough for the prince because I am good enough for the prince anyway. (Stepsister leaves the kitchen)

Narrator: So is the night every girl is ready and going to the ball...well almost every girl.

(Stepsister dressed in black leaves for the ball)

Narrator: Cinderella started to cry when all the sudden a beautiful woman who dressed in green.
Fairy Godmother(Renee): Cinderella,don't cry!
Cinderella: *gasped* Who are you?
Fairy Godmother: Why I'm your fairy godmother,Cinderella...it's time to go to the ball.
Cinderella: I can't I got a lot of chores to finish.
Fairy Godmother: (magic words) Chores say no more time to restore. (the house became spotless right before Cinderella's eyes) Now to go to the ball you need a pumpkin.

Cinderella: It's outside! (as Cinderella and Fairy Godmother went outside and saw a huge pumpkin)

Fairy Godmother: (magic words) A pumpkin to be Cinderella's carriage to go to a prince's hand in marriage. (The pumpkin becomes a golden carriage) Now what else? (Cinderella shows
Fairy Godmother a cage of mice) Oh perfect! (Cinderella set down the cage) (magic words) Six mice of course they're nice as horses (The six mice become six white horses) Hmm...

Cinderella: Fairy Godmother what about these two lizards for a coach and a footman? (two collared lizards came)
Fairy Godmother: (magic words) Coach and footman,no need for wizards thanks to these lizards.(two collared lizards turn into a coach and a footman)

Cinderella: That's nice! Well almost!
Fairy Godmother: (magic words) No need to frown,you will wear a gown...no flippers,just slippers...hair to be curl for this fair girl and shine in jewels and no fools.
Narrator: All of the sudden Cinderella's ragged outfit becomes a beautiful glamorous shimmering light powder blue gown,on her head is a tiara,her ears are studded and neck are diamonds that shines like the stars at night and on her feet is a beautiful silver silk slippers encrusted in glass beads.

Cinderella: Oh fairy godmother thank you so much! (As Cinderella hop in to the carriage)
Fairy Godmother: Before you leave Cinderella you must return home at midnight.
Cinderella: Of course I will!
Fairy Godmother: You don't understand,Cinderella the magic will not last long on the stoke of twelve everything will be back as it is.
Cinderella: Thanks for the warning,fairy godmother I won't forget. (as the Fairy Godmother disappeared and the carriage begin to ride Cinderella to the ball)

The Royal Palace (Resembles to the Cinderella Castle at Walt Disney World's Magic Kingdom I don't own the castle whatsoever)

Narrator: As every guest at the ball enjoying the night away and all the ladies including the Stepsister waiting for the Prince to show up.
*Trumpet sound*
Valet: May I present to all of you,His Royal Highness, The Prince.
(The Prince (Lee) appeared and the ladies yawned)
Prince: *sighed* Huh!?!?! Oh wow! (as the Prince came downstairs)
Stepsister: I knew the Prince will like me...yoohoo over here!
Narrator: The Prince passed over the Stepsister and saw a beautiful girl with a gorgeous smile.

Prince: Hello!
Cinderella: Hello,Your Highness!
Prince: May I have this dance?
Cinderella: Of course I will dance with you.
Narrator: The Prince started to dance with the girl...the Stepsister is jealous and notice the girl before.

Stepsister: (approached) May I cut in,Cinderella? (Stepsister pushes Cinderella away from the Prince)
Prince: Huh!?!? (notice he's dancing with the Stepsister)
Stepsister: You dance lovely!
Prince: Where's the girl I'm dancing with?
Stepsister: Why my prince I am the girl and I love you!
Narrator: Cinderella's heart is broken when the Stepsister kiss the Prince and of course Cinderella ran off not because of the Stepsister but the time as well as the clock start strike twelve times...in the haste Cinderella lost one of her slippers when she return home crying.

(end of Chapter two)
 

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(Chapter Three)

(continuing with Cinderella)

Narrator: The Stepsister return home and she's angry at Cinderella grabs the slipper out of Cinderella's hand.

The Stepsister's house

Stepsister: I warn you Cinderella the Prince is good enough for me anyway.
Cinderella: How did you notice me right way?
Stepsister: I've figure you're jealous thought you might steal something fancy to get the Prince's attention but that's not good enough...pack your things now,Cinderella.
Cinderella: Why?
Stepsister: You're fired that's why!

Narrator: And Cinderella did so the Stepsister put Cinderella away to the countryside.
(Cinderella starts crying)
Narrator: The next day...
Valet: Ladies and gentlemen of this kingdom the Prince is very desperate he wants all the maidens to fit the shoe and I mean the ones who came to the ball...
Stepsister: (interrupted) Stop! He already found me and I have the other shoe let me in to the palace as the rest of all of you go home.
Valet: Oh brother,let her in!
Narrator: The Stepsister enter the palace hoping to win the Prince's heart but the Fairy Godmother saw the shoe she's holding while behind the bushes.
Fairy Godmother: That girl isn't the one for the prince...it's time to get the prince to Cinderella and I know where Cinderella is at?

Inside the palace

Narrator: The Prince saw all the girls who attended last night at the palace are gone except for the Stepsister who entered the palace.
Stepsister: Hey there Prince Charming!
Prince: I would appreciate if you address me as your royal highness.
Stepsister: Yeah right here's the other one I'm ready put them on (As the Stepsister is about to put on the slippers when all the Fairy Godmother appeared)
Fairy Godmother: (quietly) That girl is wrong for the prince...I'll take him and the shoes away to the right girl who he has seen her ever since.
Narrator: All the sudden the Prince is gone and so does the shoes.
Stepsister: *gasped* Huh!?!?! What happened to the shoes? (The Valet shows up)
Valet: Hey where's his royal highness? (Starred at the Stepsister she gulped and shrugged) Guards...take this lady to the dungeon.
Stepsister: What? Wait a minute I have nothing to do with this.

Narrator: While the guards dragged the Stepsister to the dungeon the Prince appeared on the countryside without noticing he was here...and then all the sudden he saw a girl in a ragged outfit resting under the shade of a hazelnut tree.

Prince: Hey wake up!
(Cinderella woke up and saw the Prince)
Cinderella: Huh!?!?! Oh no! (Cinderella is about to leave but the Prince grabbed her hand)
Prince: Wait don't go!
Cinderella: Who cares you found your wife already.
Prince: No I didn't...in fact I was wondering if you could put on a pair of these beautiful shoes?
Cinderella: Alright! (Cinderella took her worn out brown shoes off and put on the silver silk slippers)
Prince: Would like to dance with me?
Cinderella: yes,please!
Narrator: and thanks to the shoes and the dance Cinderella's ragged outfits becomes the gown she worn last night along with the tiara and jewels she wore as well.

Prince: Oh my stars! It's you! Tell me,what is your name?
Cinderella: Cinderella!
Narrator: The Prince's heart glow with joy and happiness and Cinderella's heart has been restore...And then all the sudden the royal carriage came...Cinderella and the Prince came.

Prince: (as he let Cinderella in the royal carriage first and then himself as well) Back to the palace I've found my bride.

Narrator: And so Cinderella and the Prince returned to the palace...the townspeople cheered to the Prince because he have found Cinderella and she accept the Prince to be his wife...while the Stepsister is behind bars...And of course Cinderella and The Prince lived happily ever after.

(The story ended)

Jade finished the story and place 'Cinderella' in the pink folder.

"Wow,at least Cinderella got the Prince but as for me I consider Lee as a friend and I don't mean a boyfriend just a friend indeed."

(end of Chapter three)
 
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That was a great ending to the story, especially with the one step-sister ending up in the dungeon. ;)
 

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(Chapter Four)

Jade's House

After Jade's mother dropped off Sam to Jade's house...Jade saw a tube package on her front door and again no address on it.

Jade opened the tube package and said to Sam..."Look at this blueprint,Sam...weird the house's material list is sweet...bricks made of gingerbread? Windows made of clear sugar? Roof made of chocolate...*gasped* Oh my this blueprint is the house belong to an old witch? This house reminds me of Hansel and Gretel...
Well they're brother and sister...I'm thinking to put to Jason Argonaut as Hansel and Invader is perfect for Gretel...The Witch is Jane Reaction...Better get started!"

Hansel and Gretel

Based on the story by the Brothers Grimm in 1812.

Characters
Narrator(Jade)
Hansel (Jason Argonaut one of my created characters)
Gretel (Invader,a non-canon character in which I ask permission first so everyone will know)
The Witch(Jane Reaction)
The Woodcutter(Bolt Upright)
The Stepmother (Hannah Lulu)

Narrator: Once upon a time there lived a woodcutter who has two children named Hansel and Gretel...ever since their mother passed when they were young...their father remarried again as Hansel and Gretel grew up.

The Woodcutter's House

(The Woodcutter (Bolt) chopped the wood as Hansel and Gretel return home)

Woodcutter: Hansel,Gretel,how much money we got?
Hansel(Jason): We didn't get the money!
Gretel(Invader): But the baker is nice and give us a loaf of bread.
Woodcutter: Why that's good! (as the Stepmother (Hannah) came out of the house)
Stepmother: Not good enough,Husband!
Woodcutter: Wife show the kids some respect here!
Stepmother: Husband,I sent Gretel to sell those brooms and we end up in a bushel of sweet corn.
Woodcutter: So what,Wife? We both should be thankful for Hansel and Gretel. (The Stepmother goes back inside the house)

Narrator: The Stepmother is worried for her and the Woodcutter that there's never going to be enough food for two and then she got an idea...a terrible idea!

The Forest

Narrator: The next day the Stepmother decided that Hansel and Gretel will loved to go for a walk around the woods...there's a reason why? *gulped*

Stepmother: Hansel and Gretel, you two needed fresh air and please do be careful your father will come and see you two as he finished chopping wood.
Hansel: Is that all?
Gretel: When do we have supper?
Stepmother: I don't know,stepdaughter now please go!
Hansel and Gretel: Yes,Stepmother!
Stepmother: And don't turn around I'll be right behind you.

Narrator: So Hansel and Gretel did...they are walking around the woods in circles waiting for their father to see them and their stepmother behind them.
Gretel: I'm scared,Hansel!
Hansel: Calm down,Gretel,Father should find us.
Gretel: Well where's Stepmother? She said she's right behind us.
Hansel: Come on let's go home!
Narrator: They've been walking for hours they couldn't find the house anywhere Hansel and Gretel were hungry but is getting darker and darker.
Gretel: I'm so tired!
Hansel: Me too I hope find us.
Narrator: Hansel and Gretel fall asleep...they didn't notice Stepmother wasn't there with them.

The Forest
(The sun rises and Hansel yawned and gasped)
Hansel: Gretel,wake up!
Gretel: Huh! *yawned* What? *gasped*
Narrator: and there Hansel and Gretel spotted a house so they ran to the house...Hansel knock on the door and Gretel couldn't see anyone in the house just then a tile broke off from the roof...Hansel grab the tile when all the sudden someone came out of the house.

Witch(Jane): Hey you...What are you two doing?
(Hansel and Gretel screamed)
Witch: Oh calm down why don't you two come on in I mean no harm.
Narrator: So the lady was nice to have Hansel and Gretel around when all the sudden the lady got something for them.
Witch: Here why don't you two drink this? (holding a test tube)
Hansel: What is it?
Witch: Oh I hope you like gingerbread cookies.
Gretel: Oh we like gingerbread cookies...why?
(Witch laughed out loud)
Hansel: Uh oh! I believe she's going to eat us!
(Gretel screamed)
Narrator: When all the sudden the Woodcutter came to the house.
Woodcutter: Alright Witch what are you doing to my kids?
Witch: Oh nothing much just wanted to bake cookies!
Gretel: Father,she's going to eat us!
Woodcutter: It's a lucky thing I'm here kids and as for you Witch the villagers are coming after you.
Witch: *gulped and screamed and ran to get her riding broom and speed away*
Hansel: Father look what the witch left behind?
Woodcutter: No wonder why the villagers are angry at her we better take the money back to the villagers at once.

Narrator: And the Woodcutter did.

The Woodcutter's house

Stepmother: (Starting crying) Oh I'm feel ashamed I am so sorry for what I did to you two I was worried there no food for me and your father.
Hansel: We forgive you,Stepmother!
Gretel: And we got enough food for all of us to eat.
Woodcutter: The villagers were happy to have their money after the witch stole it from them.
(the doorbell rang)
Woodcutter: And speaking of food we are going to have dinner. (Stepmother,Hansel and Gretel cheered)

Narrator: And the Woodcutter and his family lived happily ever after...as for the witch well...that's another story.
 
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Good story, Jade. And I'm what happened to the witch would be a good story, too. But you don't have to tell us that one..we can guess. Ha, ha, ha. ;)
 

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(Chapter Five)

Jade's House

Jade came inside the house after someone knock on the door and left a basket for Jade.

Jade place the basket on the table..."Boy this basket has a great aroma." she said "I better find out what this basket contains."

And Jade did..."a flame grilled citrus marinated chicken and there's garden salad,black beans,sweet made from scratch corn muffins with a side of honey butter...and for dessert...sugar free blackberry cobbler glad I got a sugar free vanilla ice cream in the freezer."

The doorbell rang...Jade answered the door...

"Ah Jade,here's your drink and a message. " said the delivery man.
"Thank you!" said Jade as the delivery man leaves.
"Wow! Diet Half Southern Sweet Iced Tea and Half Lemonade!"
Jade place her drink to the fridge and she open the large envelope and saw a note that said 'make a story that has a tween before a criminal queen...don't forget the color red!'

"Another clue another who is the tween before a criminal queen...wait a minute!" I've got it!" said Jade when the phone rings and Jade answer the phone...it was for one of her friends that called.

"I definitely will write a story about Little Red Riding Hood except it's different...the tween before a criminal queen yup it's Carmen Sandiego alright...Instead of a grandma why not a grandpa like The Chief for example,a hero to save red riding hood is none other than Chase Devineaux and the wolf is really who else it will be...This story is going to be sweet!

Red Rider

Based on the story 'Little Red Riding Hood' by Charles Perrault in 1697 and the Brothers Grimm in 1812 (I don't own the story just so everyone knows)

Characters
Narrator (Jade)
Red Rider (Carmen Sandiego except she's thirteen years old)
Hunter,Red Rider's best friend and a hero as well (Chase Devineaux except he's fifteen years old)
Grandpa,Red Rider's grandfather (The Chief/Dr.Weller)
Mr. Samurai,a wise man and friend to Grandpa (Suhara Nakamura)
B.B. Wolfe,a criminal who is really a wolf in disguise.(Unknown)

(The story begins)

Narrator: Once upon a time there was a girl who's thirteen years old and wears her lucky red newsboy cap and rides a bike everyday...everyone knows the girl as 'Red Rider'... one day Red Rider's grandfather is sick so she decided to visit him by bringing him shortbread cookies for his tea in her favorite basket.

(Red Rider (Carmen) rides her bike with her favorite basket and then she stops)
Hunter (Chase): Whoa! Red Rider,where are you going?
Red Rider: I'm going to see Mr. Samurai
Hunter: What for?
Red Rider: To pick his gift to my grandfather he's sick with a cold.
Hunter: Oh I get it if I were you I take the long road.
Red Rider: Oh Hunter why can't I take the short road?
Hunter: Because of a criminal called B.B. Wolfe that's why when you're heading for your grandfather's house.
Red Rider: Oh Hunter there's no way a criminal lives around the short road my grandfather lives in a fork between the short road and the long road.
Hunter: You maybe right,Red but I'm telling you don't go to the short road.
Red Rider: But I'll get lost in the long road so I better take the short road...so long Hunter! (Red Rider rides on her bike)


Narrator: As Red Rider stops at Mr. Samurai's house...Red Rider talks to Mr. Samurai about what Hunter warns her about not taking the short road.

Mr. Samurai (Suhara): Hunter is absolutely right,Red...The criminal is going after something or someone.
Red Rider: *moaned* Do I have to take the long road I'll get lost? (Mr. Samurai place two oranges in Red Rider's basket)
Mr. Samurai: Oh Red I don't know what to say for that matter but you must beware of that criminal is that clear?
Red Rider: Yes sir! (As Red Rider rides her bike).

Narrator: Red Rider saw the fork (I mean intersection not a utensil) both Hunter and Mr. Samurai advice her to take the long road...until someone comes near her.

Red Rider: *gasped and turns around*
(end of chapter five)
 

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