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  1. systemcat

    Plot Line B?

    I think it's easier to digest and can taste good if spiced correctly. .... After the most recent failure. .... If anyone has a real interest in reading .. ( Honestly the failure feels worse with every new publication ) I updated my FF.net profile the other day giving details for easier to...
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    Thanks guys I feel like I've written another dud. ?

    Thanks guys I feel like I've written another dud. ?
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    Plot Line B?

    This page as promised does return the story back to plot line B. ... Is anyone reading these comments? ... Five years of work on this AU, I am now convinced my prose based work is cursed.
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    [Chat Log] Nov-Dec 2019

    I tried to reply over a half an hour ago but my connection went out. When I can't sleep normally starts at about 4am. I'm on Central.
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    [Chat Log] Nov-Dec 2019

    @Lucy I wish. I have a sleeping disorder and my medicine isn't working.
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    [Chat Log] Nov-Dec 2019

    Barely slept .....uuhhhh
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- For two days the Partlow, Bumpass and Sullivan Detective Agency had wondered what had happened to it's missing employee. That mystery ended when the middle name returned to work looking sheepish and was noticed to be wearing a hospital wristband, IDing him with basic information. Not...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- The place made Linus feel unease and sadness as he entered with Patrick into the man made cavern. It many years back had served as a storage place for construction equipment and work base for those that had helped create it. Now it served a different purpose and not one he and his fellow...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- When Chester woke up he knew instantly the pain he felt had to be from the knock on the head he'd gotten. When he opened his eyes he found things weren't so different as they'd been shut. At least here it was cooler than it had been on East 60th Street. Temperature aside he almost...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- Going over to sit at his desk to reach for his phone, Private First Class officer Bayon Neot wondered again about the new company. The elderly lady who'd told him she worked for a detective agency named ACME and that her name was Jocelyn Deyriès. He'd never heard of them before. He didn't...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- He'd done this sort of thing before. Play an undercover role in hoping to uncover new information. In this case it was looking like he was a vagrant and resting up in the alley, Fannon had been going to before he disappeared. Chester's hope was that if he stayed here long enough the right...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- Memorizing the active times for the city's various subway trains had happened by necessity and lucky for Patrick the trains rarely deviated from their schedules. He'd been able to hop down into the track area from the boarding area, un-noticed while people bustled into the passenger cars...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    ----- Days without discovering some form of new evidence what had happened to what to a degree was his case. At least what appeared as to officially be his case. Finding out the whereabouts of a man named Dennis Fannon. The concern to locate him had been brought to the Partlow Bumpass and...
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    A Snake Pit of 30-06 Springfield

    Because of formatting problems with Microsoft Word I have to download new software to wrap up this story's more formal presentation. ... My connection is crap right now, so the guess is a few hours from now for the alternate version of Office. The DeviantArt posting will have a ton of comments...
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    Done! Now all I have to do is formatting it for a rich text file to PDF and refine my comments...

    Done! Now all I have to do is formatting it for a rich text file to PDF and refine my comments for the DA posting.
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    The Chat Area

    So no fear of wrath of the admin. ? :oops:
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    The Chat Area

    Euhh, I don't want to get on Chase's bad side. Please forgive the question. ?
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    To the people liking my little updates here over Snake Pit being worked on. I say likely it's...

    To the people liking my little updates here over Snake Pit being worked on. I say likely it's proofing might be finished tomorrow. But if you want, I could PM you a clip or two I doubt will change during the final proofing stage.
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    The Chat Area

    If the chat box area was not part of the forum established from the start of this place's domain registration. If it is some kind of added plugin from elsewhere. Where did it come from? I ask this on behalf of a place I know better than to say a word about. I think it's users would like how this...
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    So... if you were drafting a cast (let's say voice, as if animated, and then, as if live action (preferred)... so do it as "cast/cast") for a potential Carmen movie (big movie... think Fellowship Of The Rings-level big... (assuming someone had a big enough story/script, and could find all the other people)... who would you want?
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    I'm working on continuing it, but input would be good. Maybe if it could be finished, maybe it could be printed as a book, or maybe sold as a movie (only for a big amount, and the original author get's a big cut)... if anyone, after reading through that folder (it's a live folder, so updates on my end go live when I save. If you have something to add, stash it someplace and let me know... I'll try to work it in as the story stands.))
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    Why do we have Countries named also as food? 🤣
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