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Plot Line B?
I'm just going to hold my tongue and that has nothing to do with the comic's story. ?- systemcat
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Plot Line B?
I highly doubted anyone would get the Rockapella trivia nugget on DA so I explained it over there. Another aspect of writing to this page was lightly touched on over there too. But here .. I'm not going to explain it. my trash doesn't matter.- systemcat
- Post #300
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Plot Line B?
This is a busy scene on a number of accounts. Finn with Serpente Di Giada's phone is the obvious. What is not so obvious I think are a couple setups taking place on the page. One a joke, the second a nod to ... garbage.- systemcat
- Post #299
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Plot Line B?
No one has read it. Or if they have, they haven't felt it's worth saying any words over it. Honestly with how non-existent it's been received, I am in debate about another story I want to write. I feel like what would the point be to a follow up if the story leading into it wasn't read?- systemcat
- Post #298
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Plot Line B?
It was posted here back on the 14th. ... Unless you count ideas that had been brewing lightly since 2016. I worked on it steadily from last Sept. until the date of posting. I also know an element of the scene coming up in the comic will look to fit the story but Shattered helps explanation along...- systemcat
- Post #296
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Plot Line B?
I meant I'm soon removing the story I spend months on unless I get some sign of acknowledge it exists to others. Here, FF . net, DA, Wattpad, and A03 ... I wasted my time working every day on it.- systemcat
- Post #294
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Plot Line B?
Either Shattered hasn't been read by anyone anywhere, or it's trash not worth commenting on. The only comments it got were by a person who didn't understand it was a PDF and thought it was an image. One day left until deletion here.- systemcat
- Post #292
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Plot Line B?
Two days to go after this posting. ... Nice to know my work is garbage. Yet, people might tell me not to stop posting this comic if I say I'll stop. ... I told Chase last night I'm also considering deleting the art connected to Shattered. With what commenting it did get, I don't feel like seeing...- systemcat
- Post #290
- Forum: Writers' Loft
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
This is over the ending chapters of the story and bonus content. You wrapped up everything nicely while at the same time due to influences, had me wondering if elsewhere you're writing fan fiction for other fandoms as well. I'm also wondering what is the full catalog of video games you've...- systemcat
- Post #80
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Plot Line B?
I'm deleting Shattered a.k.a. trash not worth anyone's time four days from now unless someone actually cares I wrote it. --- Originally when writing the version of this having Sydney in a park going after birds, the scene had her completely in the woods. Why that got tossed aside was remembering...- systemcat
- Post #289
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
I went over chapters 41-44 today. Most everything feels like it's wrapping up by now but I know there's more to come. I was reminded of various sci fi and fantasy going through this like for example the island. It made me think of Marvel's Savage Land. I don't know if this person from DA ever...- systemcat
- Post #78
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Comment by 'systemcat' in media 'Concept - Eartha Brute's Mech Suit'
Eartha Brute having a mech suit in the Iron and Steel-verse, I have a lot of details figured out around it. How she came about it, how she gets to use it. I bet the villain who is her answer for getting to cause destruction is so left field, no one will guess in advance who it is. I've been...- systemcat
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Concept - Eartha Brute's Mech Suit
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Plot Line B?
There's been no reactions or comments to the last couple pages. Not a peep even about the other writing project undertaken for a while. ... I'm on a roll. I think it's an easy guess where things are switching to next on plot line B. This coming scene with Sydney started as simple but when the...- systemcat
- Post #288
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Comment by 'systemcat' in media 'Lupin'
Between this piece, the Carmen piece, and Zack's, were these drawn for the fun of it or at least what rings to my mind. Were the pieces made to go along side written blurbs for each character for an information page for your comic?- systemcat
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
This is over chapters 37-40. The story appears to be coming back together. Please forgive me for thoughts of it feeling a little disjunct at times. Was part of this section being influenced by a computer RPG?- systemcat
- Post #76
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Plot Line B?
... I posted on Monday. .. I feel like I guess what I produced was garbage. No where. Not a single review. My writing for prose ... is awful. ... I started on some concept art last night. If people had read ... well they'd have an idea what the concept art, what it's subject matter would be...- systemcat
- Post #287
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
I went over chapters 33-36 today. You were really on a videogame kick while writing sections of this right? Even with knowing where the content came from and knowing what is here is a re-vision, I still feel a little in the dark. But who am I to speak. I bet both of us have different ideas on...- systemcat
- Post #74
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
I went over chapters 29-32 this evening. There are moments I'm very curious about the references I'm sure I'm missing. Like for example I'm sure the gum powers bit came from something. Although the paint covering one. Ok, I've never played this but based from what little I know of it. Did you...- systemcat
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Jon Eckart:
So... if you were drafting a cast (let's say voice, as if animated, and then, as if live action (preferred)... so do it as "cast/cast") for a potential Carmen movie (big movie... think Fellowship Of The Rings-level big... (assuming someone had a big enough story/script, and could find all the other people)... who would you want? -
Jon Eckart:
((The story I'm thinking of is this: Khisondhanna (adopted) - Google Drive
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Jon Eckart:
I'm working on continuing it, but input would be good. Maybe if it could be finished, maybe it could be printed as a book, or maybe sold as a movie (only for a big amount, and the original author get's a big cut)... if anyone, after reading through that folder (it's a live folder, so updates on my end go live when I save. If you have something to add, stash it someplace and let me know... I'll try to work it in as the story stands.))
