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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 29 Though Lee was strong, he wasn't too bright, or fast, or skilled, and with strategic dodging and well-placed attacks, he was on his last legs before Zack knocked him off of them. With Lee down, they were able to focus on Koga Shuko, who split himself into three Shadow warriors to...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 28 Tenchi and Carmen decided to return to Chez Acidophilus for the final planning stages after acquiring a new converter and red gem. On their return, the girls headed to the planning room with all the yogurt they could carry. Going over map routes and photos pinned down by tacks, they...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 27 As the game began, Carri Daway introduced herself and her co-host, singing, “Mi, mi, mi! Welcome, today it’s your favorite announcer Carri Daway! We are here today to watch people play! And introducing my fellow announcer who once played a bouncer! Illinois Will!” Illinois Will said...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 26 At this point, the Baron took out a ring, as did a few select others in the crowd who revealed rings with the same design. They were all the same size, so they could be worn on the thief’s ring finger or a necklace. The thieves present expected Double to have one and were going to...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 25 Meanwhile, back in Siberia, Rock Howard and Zack Monaghan were arriving to join Kylie and Tatyana. Morale was high as Rock and Zack ended up having previous encounters with the Golden Lords and were experienced with the obstacle they posed. Polly took the time to quickly arrange...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 24 Tenchi and Carmen walked down admiring the detailed masonry work and, upon reaching the door, saw it had an indentation that Carmen’s Moon of Moldavia would fit perfectly. When Carmen inserted the gem, the door opened, and the floor they were standing on started to move them inside...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 23 The first stop was Moldova, and upon arriving, Carmen heard the familiar info dump of an ACME detective. Tenchi spouted, “Formerly known as Bessarabia, this region was an integral part of the Romanian principality of Moldavia until 1812. Then it was ceded to Russia by its suzerain...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 22 Carmen wanted to know how Tenchi attained master rank as it was more than skill needed, but also experience. Tenchi said when the Golden Lords deployed the 701s to take out rival drug lords in Asia, he came across them when his friend Rock Howard was put on the case. Tenchi ended up...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 21 Kate understood the reasoning behind that decision as she jotted down information in her Hobonichi Techo notebook. Nations were unwilling to be seen as helpless in the face of the people who knew the iron body and respected their level of strength. They were saying without saying...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 20 While they were distracted, Tenchi noticed a map of the location where they would meet. And he realized it must be what they used to cover their tracks. With a plan like this, not even Shuko would be stupid enough to use computers to hold the information. They could be spied on or...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 19 While done on a strategic whim, It had made her the center of attention, and no one liked that better than she did. Lee, however, was getting more angered as things went on. Carmen was paying more attention to Tenchi, and they were so taken by the people’s applause that they stopped...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 18 Kylie remarked, “Are you kidding me? This is like a Saturday morning cartoon. These VILE goons can’t beat us, but we have to outsmart them anyway.” Tatyana, backing away, added, “Yes Kylie and you have a plan to outsmart them right!?” Kylie answered, “Outsmart them yes. A plan for...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 17 When the curator came out to see the commotion, he saw an empty museum yard. The police were called immediately after realizing what had happened, and they forwarded the case to ACME directly. They had already lost a tower, but Tenchi and Kylie had gotten it back now; there was a...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 16 The Golden Eagle was coming into the station at Yekaterinburg while the passengers were enjoying a delicious breakfast. After eating, the riders disembarked when the train came into Yekaterinburg station. Sachi Karin knew it was time to rendezvous with Carmen and headed off to meet...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 15 When the Golden Lords discovered this world’s existence, they wanted in but were looked down on until the 701s were made members of their company. While the Golden Lords were still seen as mob bosses and regarded as such by the aristocrats, they were finally acknowledged. Three...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 14 Some considered doing this search as a friendly rivalry, while others decided to win by any means necessary. This takes us to the office of one named Valmont. He wore a green suit with a black shirt hiding a very athletic tall build with flaxen blonde hair in a ponytail. And it is...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 13 Russia had agreed to verify all their communications and radio channels in situations like this. The reason was an ominous one. VILE was planning something in the area; their communications would be encrypted and unverified. So while Eddie didn’t know what they were saying, he knew...- Tenchi Masaki
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Chapter 12 Tatyana asked Oscar to hold up the tray of beverages; she was thirsty and wanted tea. Oscar asked Tatyana, “Why don’t you want me to bring it to you?” Tatyana responded, “This is why Oscar.” Suddenly the cup of tea levitated off the tray and over to Tatyana. She gripped it with her...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 11 So off to see the sights they went; the arrival at Kazan was the first official city stop on the Trans-Siberian trip, and one of the sights the tourists hoped to see was Soyembika Tower. It was, therefore, a real shame Eartha Brute had stolen the tower. The authorities raced to the...- Tenchi Masaki
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The Great Trans-Syberian Adventure
Chapter 10 The soldiers started cheering and dealing with the injured while the transport APC Tenchi and Kylie pulled alongside the Clockwork train as they jumped on board. Oscar greeted them on landing and said, “Doing that was highly dangerous, mind you, and quite ill-advised! Also, the...- Tenchi Masaki
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Jon Eckart:
So... if you were drafting a cast (let's say voice, as if animated, and then, as if live action (preferred)... so do it as "cast/cast") for a potential Carmen movie (big movie... think Fellowship Of The Rings-level big... (assuming someone had a big enough story/script, and could find all the other people)... who would you want? -
Jon Eckart:
((The story I'm thinking of is this: Khisondhanna (adopted) - Google Drive
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Jon Eckart:
I'm working on continuing it, but input would be good. Maybe if it could be finished, maybe it could be printed as a book, or maybe sold as a movie (only for a big amount, and the original author get's a big cut)... if anyone, after reading through that folder (it's a live folder, so updates on my end go live when I save. If you have something to add, stash it someplace and let me know... I'll try to work it in as the story stands.))
