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Plot Line B?
... Is this thread still being read? ... ... Vocal Canvases got ignored on DA as I expected it would be. I have the impression it has one solo reader here moving through it. I already know it's been read completely by one person. On the totally unexpected note, a piece from me might be getting...- systemcat
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- Forum: Writers' Loft
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Vocal Canvases
Thank you so much for leaving a review! ? Yeah, The Contessa's personality was meant to be highly dislikeable. You'll note I even had her henchmen turn on her as the result of it. Writing Sadie at times was as kick and I find it a shame with this story being period set as far back as it is...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Vocal Canvases
Chapter 9 Benjamin after having fallen asleep on Cal and Eleonore's living room couch. During the time that had passed while events had unfolded at The Argent Suites Hotel. He hadn't been hard to awaken to be told he was going to finally be saying goodbye the country he'd first starting being...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 8: Feeling trapped happened almost instantly at seeing the VILE agent coming towards him. Starting to climb up the mound of rumble he was on high sitting with his job equipment. Looking into the hotel, Greg tried to guess exactly how far down the jump would be to the floor of the...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Entering the lobby to see what had made those under her command think they could take action independently of her telling them any thing at all. She saw two of ACME's representation, before the mystery girl that had just broken away from her VILE agent restrainer. A third person, the man who had...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 7 Revenge was the foremost thought on Sadie's mind. Second to that getting what Viola hadn't. The paintings VILE had gotten a hold of by Nazis working second jobs. As those in the truck tried to hold her back, she came close in taking action on another thought. Stabbing the men trying...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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"That's great. Ok guys, while this is taking place I'm going to have the microphone center on the table we're at. Listeners, please forgive changing in sound volume as I won't be moving around my mic, as these guys talk about what is happening." Greg stated, right before sitting down in the seat...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 6: Moving very little helped his hunger pains. Although them persisting at him had kept him awake most of the night before. Lawrence had only caught he guessed maybe four hours sleep in between bouts of uncomfortable pain not only from his bare floor to rest on, coated in raw concrete...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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"Has anything bad said against you ever been justified?" Right after Greg asked the question, he considered maybe the query was good meat for the interview. But possibly bad for his minuscule relationship with the ACME employees. He'd put it on to his list only because of the Zebra Ink reporter...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 5: Even being told what to expect by the plane's pilot and the rest of the small aircraft's staff. That hadn't made Greg feel better about them not landing on a designated for such strip of land. At least exiting the aircraft had him and the others on dry land. The tail end of the...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 4: "We are now approaching the Vue du ciel Airport and will be starting our descent at 10,000 feet. Do refasten your seal belts at this time." The plane's pilot announced over the intercom. When the announcement had come, the small aircraft's non-staff were asleep. This had been...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 3: "You guys have your own private jet?" Greg asked, as he lunged two suitcases with himself out the doorway to the runway before him of Idlewild Airport. The sight of the aircraft shocked him. He hadn't been expecting the ACME Detective Agency to have the means for such a thing in...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 2: Shadows cast their long way across the floors and walls of the ACME Detective Agency. At least the one based central to the whole operation. Jocelyn and Patrick's apartment home for the last nearly three decades. The detective agency wasn't an official business but those that worked...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Saying the tail end of these thoughts aloud, Sadie further confused those around her. "Viola, I'm sure has her reasons to do what she does. But why she'd want to remain behind in France is a mystery to me." "You're with VILE?" Jocelyn asked Sadie, as she smoothed one hand over the other...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Chapter 1: The world had seemed such a happy place yesterday. Greg Leeds, a man in his late twenties with reddish brown hair, in a loud colored suit of a teal top & blue pants. Thought that has he tried to remember that fact to dominate his thoughts. The war was now over, the good guys had won...- systemcat
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- Forum: The Studio
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Vocal Canvases
I gave my comments about this with it's DeviantArt posting. ... If you feel inclined to learn some basic reasoning behind why it was written. Please see check out the link to that page: Vocal Canvases by systemcat on DeviantArt As mentioned in those comments, this story has a lot of trivia in...- systemcat
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[Chat Log] Nov-Dec 2019
... I don't know if anyone cares. Honestly every time I finish something I think I should be proud of. It's lack of acknowledgement makes me feel I should have a problem with something other than caffeine because of the sorrow that happens ? . It's written, it's been proofed. ... It's getting... -
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It wasn't inspired by Sky Captain. Just the need to help fill in further the gap to the scene in '48. Leeds is harder to explain into ACME than Chester & Cheri, with him not being in law enforcement.- systemcat
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I'm not a horror fan. Are you going to be giving the stories a shot? Snake Pit is set in '43. ( Editing in: looking at this, now I see where it could look confusing. Overlapping replies. I wrote it responding to @Invader as Tenchi was commenting. )- systemcat
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Jon Eckart:
So... if you were drafting a cast (let's say voice, as if animated, and then, as if live action (preferred)... so do it as "cast/cast") for a potential Carmen movie (big movie... think Fellowship Of The Rings-level big... (assuming someone had a big enough story/script, and could find all the other people)... who would you want? -
Jon Eckart:
((The story I'm thinking of is this: Khisondhanna (adopted) - Google Drive
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Jon Eckart:
I'm working on continuing it, but input would be good. Maybe if it could be finished, maybe it could be printed as a book, or maybe sold as a movie (only for a big amount, and the original author get's a big cut)... if anyone, after reading through that folder (it's a live folder, so updates on my end go live when I save. If you have something to add, stash it someplace and let me know... I'll try to work it in as the story stands.))
